Reading my pastiche draft was really different from actually writing it. The flow seems as if it needs some improvement, but was well enough for someone to like. The style is really simple and straight-forward. Now seeing my pastiche as a whole, there could be more improvement. I might add more Portuguese since there is about only one paragraph that contains it.
I've seen reading it over and over that it seems a bit boring. It seems very predictable and monotone-ish. I could add some excitement to the final battle and more intense-filled scenes. It would really add some variety to the story and want the reader to really keep with the story. There is room for a lot of improvement, only to make my story better!
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