Day 19

I can't really think of something I could add that there isn't already in my pastiche. Honestly, I think I am missing some of the South American Latin cultural feeling. Like when someone thinks of Brazil they think of tropical latin stuff, and I feel as if my pastiche doesn't really capture the whole picture of that.

I want to add some things into my pastiche that makes it feel as if the reader is sucked into a Brazilian cultural tornado! I am kind of positive if I kept my pastiche the way it is, it wouldn't feel anything like if it was set up in Brazil or had anything to do with Brazil. That just gives me more to work on!